It’s fairly easy when you start a story or a novel to come up with a basic character and a goal. The next part of building a story—the conflict—is a little bit harder, but not bad. And then comes the hardest part: the stakes. This is what’s missing when a lot of people try to describe their plots: a good character, a strong goal, a compelling conflict, but no powerful stakes that make the story move.
Stakes are why everything matters. Here’s an example of what that means.
We’ll start with the character and a goal: A girl who’s the daughter of a hotel owner in St. Agatha, Maine, wants to save enough money to buy a plane ticket for Scotland.
Now for a conflict: She doesn’t have a lot of money. But one day, as she’s sorting through the storage closet of the historical society (organizing their unsorted collection is her summer job), she discovers that a smuggler from early in the town’s history left a chest of gold coins buried by the lake. Yet just as her enthusiasm rises, a volunteer at the historical society hears her asking permission to use the map, and plans to go after the treasure as well.
Sound good? It could be an exciting story of a hunt for the treasure. Only…why does it matter? Does any reader really care if she gets the treasure and has enough money to go to Scotland? Why anyone would care are the stakes.
Let’s try a few, phrasing it as one phrases stakes, with words like “must” and “if not, then what”:
- The girl must obtain the treasure because she wants to go to Scotland. If she doesn’t, then she’ll be sad. (Being sad doesn’t make for the strongest stakes.)
- The girl must obtain the treasure because she has to go to Scotland to turn off a switch linked to a powerful explosive. If she doesn’t, then the world is going to blow up. (Saving the world is in some ways powerful stakes, but it’s too broad, unless we know more about the girl and her relationships in the town, and more about why she has to be the one who must turn off the switch.)
- The girl must obtain the treasure because getting the treasure will help her escape something that’s crushing her or frightening her or about to disrupt her life in her small town. If she doesn’t, then she’ll be trapped. She’s picked Scotland because she has a cousin there who will meet her at the airport and take her home, but neither of them have any money. It’s really her last hope, because she’s running out of time. (I like these stakes best of all: They’re powerful with a good emotional punch that the end-of-world scenario was lacking.)
For this story bite, think about stakes. I’ll give you a basic premise (or come up with your own), and think about why this story matters.
Here’s our picture for this story bite:
A boy is facing another world beyond a bridge, a world in another dimension. He’s been over once, and he knows that this world can offer him something important. But if he goes, he must return within a certain amount of time or else he’ll be stuck there forever. Yet it holds something important. What makes him need to cross the bridge?
Is there another character involved? A sibling? Parent? Relative? Good friend? Are they stuck over there, or pressuring him to go, or are they involved in some other way? Why does their role matter?
Is there an item he needs that he can find only in the world across the bridge? How is it worth his risking his freedom to fetch it?
Is he running away from something? Does he hope to hide in that world long enough to escape?
What other possibilities can you think of?
Stakes always add a layer to the plot and a feeling of urgency to the story. As you can see, they can change a story’s purpose considerably. Whenever you’re thinking about stakes, think about the emotional heft. That emotion will make readers really care about your characters and their adventures—and want to keep reading.
If you’d like to share your story bite with me, please submit it through your teacher or with your school email address or home email address and include: your first name, grade, school’s name (or “homeschooled”), town, and state.
Teachers: if your make story bites part of a lesson, please let me know how it went. And share them! I’d love to see your students’ work.
What a great idea for a story prompt. The class loves the picture of the bridge in the woods. Is that on your property? It looks magical.
I love bridges like like as they always seem to promise to lead into the unknown! This bridge is on a trail in a property owned by the Freeport Historical Society. It’s an early 19th farm with a woods nearby where trees were grown for masts of sailing ships long ago. This is part of those woods. The trail leads down to a salt marsh, but the woods themselves are wonderfully creepy: all those towering old pines! I’ll do a story bite about them one day. (I’ve taken a wee break from the story bites, by the way, just because I’ve been very busy, but I’ll try to get back to them in the New Year.) Let me know if your class wants to try this one out. And if anyone’s struggling to write, I’d be happy to provide an opening sentence, or some more questions that might help prompt a story. I know that one of the hardest parts of writing is simply getting started.